Hi everybody! We had to complete a slide deck mainly about explanations. I also have a link on one of the slides to my explanation I wrote about; How Do Bees Make Honey? I hope you all learn something!
Hi Garnet- Always nice seeing you go over and above in your efforts! The feedback you are giving other bloggers is both precise and helpful. Do you enjoy reading other peoples blogs? You have made it clear that you understand exactly what is needed and not needed in an opening statement and given examples of this.
Your explanation is very thorough. You have described the hive of activity (excuse the pun) that produces honey. You have deliberately used special language (scientific terms) through out and sequenced using connectives to hep your writing flow. Keep up the fantastic work.
Hi Garnet- Always nice seeing you go over and above in your efforts! The feedback you are giving other bloggers is both precise and helpful. Do you enjoy reading other peoples blogs? You have made it clear that you understand exactly what is needed and not needed in an opening statement and given examples of this.
ReplyDeleteYour explanation is very thorough. You have described the hive of activity (excuse the pun) that produces honey. You have deliberately used special language (scientific terms) through out and sequenced using connectives to hep your writing flow. Keep up the fantastic work.
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